On the
Sidewalk Bleeding
Characters:
Andy
– (the main character)
He is the main character in the
story that was sixteen years old, and one of the Loyals, and approaching the
road of death in the March rain because of stab and wound from a thief that did
to him in the alley.
A
thief –
He was a man that robbed Andy in the
alley during the March rain.
Laura
– (minor character)
She was a dancer and Andy’s
girlfriend.
A
drunken man – (minor character)
He was the first person who saw Andy
in the Alley. He did not call a cop because of misreading the message from Andy
as he tried calling it.
Freddie
– (minor character)
A man that was trying to call a cop to
help him by all his force as he found him that was a Loayl. He did not do that because
Angela told him that she wanted to get home.
Angela
– (minor character)
She was a girl that was love with
Freddie. As she saw Andy was hurt by someone, she did not try to help and told
Freddie not to do it as well.
Old
lady – (minor character)
She was the last stranger that crossing
the alley, and also she was the only one that did not notice him. It is because
she was a little deaf.
A
cop –
He was man in the out of the alley
that heard the calling from Laura. Then, he was going to help her to save Andy.
Perpetrator
–
Guardians are the perpetrator because
they are another side of Roayls.
Rival
gangs:
The old lady, drunken man, and
Freddie and Angela all of them are the rival gangs.
Plot
line:
In the beginning, Andy was a man
that wearing a jacket that signed “Loyal”, and got stabbed from a thief in the
alley. And then he was trying to cry for help as he was realized that he will
be died soon. Also, he was missing his girlfriend, who called Laura that
dancing at home at the same moment. Then, there was a drunken man that found
him and was trying to call a cop, but he was gone and did not do that because he
misread the messages from Andy. After that, there was a man called Freddie that
kissing with his lover that called Angela. He found Andy was a loyal and got
hurt there; he did not help him to call a cop even he wanted, it was because Angela
stopped him. There was a deaf old lady was collecting materials from the garbage
after the couple were gone, but she never noticed him. Afterward, he was
understood that being one of the Loayls was a small thing in the world. Thus
hated and refused to be one of them. At the end, Laura went down and found Andy
was lying on the ground of the alley, she ran out rapidly in order to find a
cop to get help. Finally, she did, found a cop that can save her boyfriend’s
life.
Setting:
·
This event was occurred in the alley during March.
·
The main problem must be loyal. Before meeting the thief, he would like
to be one of the Loyals. After that, he hated it and also refused to be one of
them because he realized that it was a small thing in his world, and should not
care about that much.
Conflict:
There
is little reason that can conflict in the story. Because he was a loyal, the
thief stabbed him, Freddie wanted to help him. It caused him not want to be one of them. He
wanted to be himself, which was Andy, not a loyal.
Imagery:
Andy has smelled the sickening odor alcohol as the man was passing the alley. Andy also noticed that he was drunk. Besides, he did misread the messages from Andy, and he thought he was drunk and laying there to get a rest. He did not notice that he was bleeding. We could image the setting of that moment. Throughout the alcoholicity that he had drunk, he could not standing stably and his words was nonsense.
Andy
was “Andy”, not a “Royal”
For the reason of him that wanted to
be Andy, not a Royal, was because that he wanted to be himself. Throughout this
incident, he has already realized that being a loyal was the great pride, but
it also was the insignificant things in the world. The thief stabbed him and some
stranger wanted to help because he was one of the Royals.
Creative
writing:
After the words Andy said in his minds, "Rain is sweet, I'm Andy", the
world entered into the paralleled universe. Began to change every things and
moment, just returned to the time that he was not a Loyal yet.
At this moment.........
"I cannot get into Royals, but why?" said Andy.
"Just calm down," said Laura.
"I can't, it is all my dreams," said Andy to Laura.
After the talk, he ran away rapidly and meet a loyal. A few minutes later, he killed him by his anger and rage. Finally, his thoughts were suddenly changed as failed to be one of Loyals. He became a man who hated Loyal very much, and then he decided to be a guardian and started to become a murderer of killing Loyal. Finally, being of this was turned into the important thing in his whole life.
At this moment.........
"I cannot get into Royals, but why?" said Andy.
"Just calm down," said Laura.
"I can't, it is all my dreams," said Andy to Laura.
After the talk, he ran away rapidly and meet a loyal. A few minutes later, he killed him by his anger and rage. Finally, his thoughts were suddenly changed as failed to be one of Loyals. He became a man who hated Loyal very much, and then he decided to be a guardian and started to become a murderer of killing Loyal. Finally, being of this was turned into the important thing in his whole life.
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